Hometown, poetic gown part 3



Cull lough's divinity enshrined
Serendipities, sculled scavenger
Hull's harmony with body's alignment
Aquatic acupuncture
Bodily release of energised ephemeral



Aesthetical pondering: First the text, then the image or vice versa?? :))
Which variant appeals more to thy eye?:)

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