Hometown, poetic gown part 4


Reel in the luscious layers of lake
Linger 'til the languish lash levitates
to the lower brow
Lids locked, docked dormancy in awe
Trained pupil perpetually perceiving
Interweaving afterglow of the sir's face
Consciousness commanding aftercrop of liquid trace, of puddles petrifying
semifluid poesy into greater paddles
Saddled with befuddlement
Trotting & knotting reality to hue-man's wake




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  1. poetofdarkness29a7 February 2020 at 08:50

    Hail to the bejeweled master of manifold vowels, consonants and syllables concatenating thoughts and soul in a stream of infinite ripples in your mind. Look forward to reading more ...

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  2. Unknown11 February 2020 at 15:20

    Mind blogging

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