Reel in the luscious layers of lake Linger 'til the languish lash levitates to the lower brow Lids locked, docked dormancy in awe Trained pupil perpetually perceiving Interweaving afterglow of the sir's face Consciousness commanding aftercrop of liquid trace, of puddles petrifying semifluid poesy into greater paddles Saddled with befuddlement Trotting & knotting reality to hue-man's wake
Haven ripple Lensing cleanse Misbehavin' wave Lacerable lens pens curled-up vita Dischargeable depths Perm of time consuming linear rhyme, delineate lining Curling shoots hurling roots To subterranean woe Woe's woven wealth Stealth to flesh's pulp Shaven sound, silence's core Waven rebound Trepid territory Reflection: Does the picture take away from the individual imaginative conjuring or does it in fact compliment the poem adequately? :)) Do both elements serve each other well in your opinion or were you in fact linguistically misled? :))
Beautiful poetry and photos
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