Hometown, poetic gown part 1

Haven ripple

Lensing cleanse

Misbehavin' wave

Lacerable lens

pens curled-up vita

Dischargeable depths

Perm of time consuming

linear rhyme, delineate lining

Curling shoots hurling roots

To subterranean woe

Woe's woven wealth

Stealth to flesh's pulp

Shaven sound, silence's core

Waven rebound

Trepid territory

Reflection: Does the picture take away from the individual imaginative conjuring or does it in fact compliment the poem adequately? :))
Do both elements serve each other well in your opinion or were you in fact linguistically misled? :))